L.g to create our school mihi

Te kura o whakaahurangi mihi

Kia ora koutou katoa

Greetings to you all

Ko Anika taku ingoa

My name is Anika

Ko Alisha taku mama

My mother is Alisha

Ko Richard taku papa

My father is Richard

No whakaahurangi ahau

I am from stratford

Tekau ma tahi taui

I am 11 years old

Ko matua Geoff te kaiako

My teacher is Geoff

No te whanau whitu waru ahau

I am from the year 7 and 8 team/syndicate

Ko matua Jason te tumuaki o taku kura

Jason is the principal of my school

No reira e te whanau ka nui te mihi

Therefor an extended greetings to our school

Tena koutou tena koutou tena tatou katoa

Greetings greetings greetings to us all

By Anika

L.G write recount on our experiences at camp

 

Sos sequence ideas

Interesting beginning to hook in the reader

Use a variety of descriptive language features

Use interesting and engaging ideas  

Use paragraphs

Use past tense

“It’s hot” sam,abbie,jenna,shiketa ,noah,jai,daisy,aidan and me said as we walk down the drive to the horses i can’t wait, abbie and jenna are scared but i knew they will be fine!

We are lining up in front of the gate as he brings bobby over.he said “you look like a jockey” i stand there like what me???? Naaaa….. But yeah it was me.

Ahhh!!! Jai said he’s so worried about falling off. I said “if u just hold on sit properly then you will be fine”

We stop let the horses eat swap horses i don't have to because no one chose my horse we go back hop off i don't want to hop off i asked if i could keep bob he said yeah but you would have to put him in your suitcase

(WELL THAT WAS FUN)