L.g we are learning to recount an exciting event so that our reader knows what happens and
how we feel.
Sos. to include detail
. to use interesting vocabulary adjective verbs adverbs.
. title
. written by ……..
. illustration
My not so great hoilday
The dark red is expelling the emergency room in the hospital that i was waiting in there for hours . the blue is repasting the very nice doctor who was looking after to me and explained everything to me so i understand everything . yellow and green are expelling the tully tubbys on the wall they were donated in 2005 and painted in 2004 . the white is for my bone when i got my x-ray i am diagnosed with a disease that you can't catch but you can only get it if you do a lot of sport it is very painful for me. but i can only do sport if i feel comfortable with what sport i'm playing .the black is representing the x-ray boards the were really cold they remind me of the dark night.
By Anika
Year 6
Age 10
